the history of the cursed uchiha

well imagine waken up in the house and u go to the bathroom and u do ur business( lol........ it takes time......ok ur done wow took u long enough) and u look in the mirro and u c that ur eyes r red, but wait...... u think to ur self........ maybe my eyes r red because of me playing the game so much last night......well who cares. so u continue ur day, but u start to notice that ur vision is very clear and u can scence things right before they happin.......u think nothing of it........ok ur coming home from school (u usually take the street but hey u take a short-cut...... the ail) while u were walking on ur way home u meet a stranger in the ail (u would run at this point but scence ur eyes r red u decide to stand ur ground) so this stranger talks to u about joining his clan, and all u have to do is kill or destroy a whole state within 1 hour. ( now u r thinkin this guy is nuts but i have been scencing things all day and i can move a little bit faster and in a little bit stronger......well what the heck) so u say ok i'll do it.......under on condition u have......to...... make me stronger and faster than the average human, is it a deal, and the guy says ok............to be continued

Now u r getting ur self together for tomorrow, and ur asking ur mother can u stay the night over a friends house, and of course she says yes because ur such a good son . now u go to school and u only told one friend that u truly trust what happen to u yesterday. so u told him and he kinds of believes u but he tells u the stuff thats been happin to him, so u ask him: do u want to come and train with me? and he says: yeah. so later on.............................u both come out of school and ur friend follows u but u have ur douts about him but u shrud it off. so u meet the guy in the same spot, now u can c the strangers face a little more, but only the strangers eyes . so the strangers does some kind of weird hand signs and all of a sudden u guys telliport to a place were its very quiet and peace full(so far so good)( and its sunny now)so u can now c this persons face and it turns out to be.....................to be continued

Tobi uchiha! he explains to them his history and what he's trying to do, so u want to know what u r doing in such a wide plain area? and tobi tells u: to train and for u to try and kill me in the near future.
Tobi: so now that i have u here why dont u two introduce ur selfs?
kemade (ke-ma-de): well my name is kemade ray. (he's the main character)
londan: my name is londan walker (friend of kemade)
tobi: nice to meet the both of u. now we will start with the basics, well i want to c what type of fighters r u guys so that i can train u strongly in that area and in ur weaker area, ok so lets start.
kemade: ( his eyes r starting to hurt a little but brushes it off) Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
londan: (looks at kemade while fighting and try's to the same or better) Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh
tobi: very good, now i can tell what kind of fighters u r, next is ur element .
to be continued...................

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Tobi: now i have here 6 sheets of papper, now what we r going to do with this papper is see what kind of element u have.
Kemade: well how can we tell what element we have if we never used it?
Tobi: its every simple, the paper will cut it two piece, if water the paper will get wet, if fire the paper will burn, if lighting the paper will wrinkle, and if earth the paper will crumble. ok
Kemade: ok got it.
Londan: ok.
Kemade: WAIT! how do we get the paper to do all of that wonderful stuff?????
Londan: yeah?
Tobi: o......well i kind of forgot to show u how to transfer your chacra to paper of even in ur body, ok here........sit. now concentrate......... focus in on ur spirit....... now transfer that energy that u feel out and let it live.
Kemade: ( he feels it a little but he does have some control over it but thinks he have a lot of chacra)
Londan: ( is trying but he is trying to control it) ..................to be continued........i have to go get my little bro real fast be right back to finish.

Can't u just call Tobi Madara Uchiha?

King Of Evil wrote:

Can't u just call Tobi Madara Uchiha?

um i dont think so because the tobi im talking about is the one that teamed up with kakashi back in the day.

g4atw wrote:

King Of Evil wrote:

Can't u just call Tobi Madara Uchiha?

um i dont think so because the tobi im talking about is the one that teamed up with kakashi back in the day.

Kakashi's friend was Obito not Tobi lol. Tobi is Madara Uchiha but uses that name so no one will knows hes Madara Uchiha.

King Of Evil wrote:

g4atw wrote:

King Of Evil wrote:

Can't u just call Tobi Madara Uchiha?

um i dont think so because the tobi im talking about is the one that teamed up with kakashi back in the day.

Kakashi's friend was Obito not Tobi lol. Tobi is Madara Uchiha but uses that name so no one will knows hes Madara Uchiha.

thats right lol i totally for got. i will go back and make a few changes.lol